Typography - Feedback of my works

Feedback from Lecturer

During the consultation session, my initial typographic explorations were rejected as the compositions relied too much on decorative ideas rather than expressing the meaning through typography itself. The lecturer advised me to focus more on experimentation with letterforms, spacing, composition, hierarchy, and visual balance instead of adding unnecessary graphical elements.

I was also encouraged to:
- produce a larger variety of thumbnail sketches
- explore more dynamic arrangements
- improve the relationship between form and meaning
- avoid overly literal or illustrative approaches
- push the typography further through distortion, scaling, rotation, and spacing

Based on the feedback received, I decided to restart my sketch explorations and develop stronger concepts that communicate the words more effectively using typography alone

Here are some of my artworks:





 

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